Saturday, 1 June 2013

The Soldier's Return - a poem.

Following on from yesterday's post about Wilfred Owen, I thought I would share a poem I wrote, which is inspired by the second half of his poem 'The Send Off'  It explores what might happen to the soldiers, who are lucky enough to make it home.  I hope you like it.

A Soldier's Return  
by Annie Bell

A soldier came home from the battle,
War weary, wild and worn right out.
He walked the familiar homeward road.
His pack weighed heavy;
His heart weighed heavier.
Expectation loomed,
Rearing its ugly head;
Demanding that he just return
And rejoin that old life, from before.
He no longer knew the old him.
A ghost of a whisper;
A memory – just a trace – flickered weakly
But he knew that version of him
Had died in the battle.
It had drowned 'neath swathes of
Khaki, spattered with sticky patterns of deepest red.

Approaching the town of his birth,
His queerly quiet return
Qualified his invalidity.
There were no parades.
No church bells rang to announce him.
No crowds cheered his safe return.
No-one had even mustered a protest
To jeer his flawed mission.
Instead, a blank normality
Stared blankly back at him
With soulless, indifferent eyes.

She stood on the doorstep,
Just as he remembered her.
Her eyes lit at the sight of his own.
She had waited, longing for this moment.
He had stared at her image
In the darkest, muddy depths.
The fantasy of the memory of her
Had kept him alive.

They were the lucky ones;
Reunited, against the odds
But all would not be as it seemed.
In this façade of normality,
A bitter edge browned the petals of their love.

He wouldn't want to burden her.
She wouldn't understand
How he had changed;
How his exuberance was no more;
How love now seemed so transient.
His naivete and optimism
Replaced with harshest cynicism;
Replaced with a worn out soul,
Who no longer embraced profanities;
Who saw life as the fleeting heartbeat that it was.

His children would berate him.
His wife would make half meant excuses.
“Oh, he's just a cantankerous old bugger.”
He would raise a lonely eyebrow.
His pain would remain concealed within.
They would never,
Could never
Understand his pain.

His future children
And his children's children
Would never know him.
The war had killed their father.
All they would know was the implosive shell that remained.

© Annie Bell 2013

3 comments:

  1. This poem has provoked my thoughts. This is basically what also happened to England before and after WW1, represented here by the poor soldier returning home. The country after WW1 lost its innocence, became permanently scared and was never the same. The word cynical is well chosen here and I think that was how life became, more cynical and it despoiled the nation - ripped out a generation. A.E.Housman's poem from his masterpiece, "The Shopshire Lad" - The Lads In Their Hundreds, is equally sad but this time they never grow old. These were lads with their own personalities and their lives before them and squashed by a flick of the wrist. Housman explores what life was like before and after the war - worth a look.

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  2. This poem was very thought provoking. What happened to this soldier coming back from war is a good way of describing what happened to the whole country. After WWI England had been despoiled by countless loss of life and a whole generation were ripped out. The word cynical is spot on - the country lost its innocence and became permanently scarred. A.E Housman's poem "The Lads In Their Hundreds" from his masterpiece, "Shopshire Lad", is equally sad. This time the lads never grow old. He laments about young men with their own lives and personalities, destroyed at a flick of the wrist. Housman's poetry explores life before and after WW1 and describes similar developments you do. Worth a look too.

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  3. This poem was very thought provoking. What happened to this soldier coming back from war is a good way of describing what happened to the whole country. After WWI England had been despoiled by countless loss of life and a whole generation were ripped out. The word cynical is spot on - the country lost its innocence and became permanently scarred.

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